Monday, April 7, 2014

ABOUT MY HAPPY

I) INTRODUCTION

These things make my happy is, when people show nice to me, increasing my happiness.
When people watch the gratitude is a key element for me to be happy in my life.
Sometimes, if I get nice words from my husband.
When, everyone around me.
When I exchange with positives and optimistic people.
At last,  when my family takes my news (for me, it's a huge weight).

II) BODY

Changing face,
Changing mind,
Mooving body ( example : sometime, I'm shy. As soon as, my family calls me, my body transform automatically.  I'm happy inside of my body),
Feeling young,
I don't worry again.

III) EXAMPLE


I like when  my husband takes care of me. My family calls me. When people encourage me when I do something. (If its good).

IV) CONCLUSING

Finally, I thing, if you have a good heart, you thing positively, and you are nie to others, then love will come you way! Because the life, is for sharing and loving.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Mahoua,
    I commend you on trying to improve your writing and sending in a second version - good for you! You separated your paragraphs - good - but you don't have to number them or label them - ok? If you have any questions please ask me anytime!

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  2. Ok. Thanks for everything marcella. This comment give me the power to do more effort next time.

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